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Angel Tears

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This is for yet Another contest.......................
This one is called ''THE ANGELS ARE CRYING'' from the group photomanipulatorsx3.deviantart…
from this journal-fav.me/d795yob

the stock used-
the girl-fav.me/d6tuykn
the background-Manipulated: Foggy Ocean by DebauchedSeductresstheheek.deviantart.com/art/Man…
the wings-Cut-out stock PNG 57 - barn owl by Momotte2stockstheheek.deviantart.com/art/Cut…

the feathers is a brush -fav.me/dyjoza
I love comments and feedback so tell me what u think?
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I would work on your hair extraction technique a bit more. Her hair looks very flat and angular, when it should be flowing (according to the feathers there is a wind). Her dress should also have more flow and movement to it.

The overall color and lighting is very nice! But the highlights on the forehead, shoulder and upper dress are too bright. You should avoid "hot spots" like this as they make the area look flat, and destroy the ares detail.

Having a singular wing is a good idea, but the wing that is the is blurry for no reason. Also the feathers in the front of the image, while in a good place, are too big. Even considering that they are closer the the camera than the woman is.

Overall this is a very nice concept, I would just keep practicing some of your base techniques more, such as extracting and compositing. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="276" title="Love"/>