mirror mirror poem

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mirror mirror on my wall,
i know iam not so very tall perhaps its my lack of being so determined or my own
disgruntled dillusion
a world on the edge of the tallest abyss falling headfoward into blackness
the plunge so deadly i can see it up ahead it gives off a warning"you're better off dead''
the crown of thorns digs deep into me
my very own obstacle i seem to be
so very different from all of the rest running to catch up being put to the test
dragging my heels deep into debt deep into something inside of my head
someplace so small but a smigin a wall how do i account for it all?
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Cosmic-Cuttlefish's avatar
I enjoyed reading this: the poem has a good rhythm when spoken aloud, and I find that I can relate well to its message. My favourite lines are "the crown of thorns digs deep into me / my very own obstacle i seem to be" - it reminds me that sometimes, our own minds and the barriers they create can be our worst enemies.